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Congratulations to Krista Jensen of Cody, WY who won the second copy of “The Canticle Kingdom.” Apparently she really did get some things off of this list for Christmas.
1 Kindle e-reader
2 book release dates
3 pedicures
4-piece flannel sheets
5 FULL BODY MASSAGES
6 pairs of socks (I need some, okay?)
7-day writing retreat
8 maids
9 times the energy
10 new Kindle books
11 free loads of laundry
12 chocolate truffles
A safe and happy New Year to you all. I’ve got a lot of exciting writing projects in the works this year and I look forward to sharing them all with you. If you want to write as well, I encourage you to make it part of your New Year’s resolutions to dive in this year. Make this the year that you write that novel or that play, or whatever it is you like to write. Small, consistent efforts will accomplish more than the occasional big effort will. Go for it! -
Congratulations to Annette Lyon! She posted her personal 12 days for Christmas and is the winner of the first copy of “The Canticle Kingdom.” Here’s the winning list:
As for my list, having a bit of fun:
1. Spotless house
2. book tours
3. trips to Disneyland
4. happy, healthy kids
5. gold rings (hey, why not?)
6. afternoon naps
7. happy hours with family
8. days to write
9. million dollars
10. chocolate pies
11. days in Europe
12. pounds lost! (more than that, but the song doesn’t go any higher)
If you didn’t win this time around, never fear. There is still one more copy up for grabs. Simply leave your list as a comment to this post or the original post, or let me know that you have tweeted, blogged, or posted the contest on Facebook. I will draw the next one on the 24th of December. -
One website totals the value of the 12 days of Christmas at nearly $100,000. Makes you wonder what this guy did for a living, and why he needed to try so hard to impress his true love. (And if he bothered to wrap any of the gifts.)
It is speculated that the song was actually a Catholic symbolism song meant to teach children:
1The partridge in a pear tree is Jesus Christ, the Son of God.
2 Turtle Doves = The Old and New Testaments
3 French Hens = Faith, Hope and Charity, the Theological Virtues
4 Calling Birds = the Four Gospels and/or the Four Evangelists
5 Golden Rings = The first Five Books of the Old Testament, the “Pentateuch”, which gives the history of man’s fall from grace.
6 Geese A-laying = the six days of creation
7 Swans A-swimming = the seven gifts of the Holy Spirit, the seven sacraments
8 Maids A-milking = the eight beatitudes
9 Ladies Dancing = the nine Fruits of the Holy Spirit
10 Lords A-leaping = the ten commandments
11 Pipers Piping = the eleven faithful apostles
12 Drummers Drumming = the twelve points of doctrine in the Apostle’s CreedFor more, see: http://www.byrum.org/misc/christmas/origin.html (This list is from that site)
Who knows?
The question is, if someone was going to do the 12 Days of Christmas to you, what would you want? Leave a comment on this post answering this question, and you could win one of two signed copies of “The Canticle Kingdom.” You don’t have to do the whole song if you don’t want, but at least on of the days.
Myself? I’d probably put more edible stuff in there like “and a pizza with pepperoni…” 12 publishing contracts would be nice too.
I will draw a winner on the 12th of December and one on the 24th (which is 12 days from the 12th). Entries are as follows:
1 entry for a blog post answering the question.
2 entries for posting on Facebook about this contest.
2 entries of posting on Twitter about this contest.
2 entries for blogging about it.(Please let me know which of these you have done in your post.)
“The Canticle Kingdom” is also available on amazon.com for a great price. Check it out here: http://amzn.com/1599553627.
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This month I was introduced to a great new tool that is especially useful for all you bloggers out there. It is a snagging tool called “SnapIt” and is incredibly easy to use and simple to learn.
The software allows you to “snag” anything on your screen and save it in a variety of formats, such as .gif, .jpg. tif and others. All you have to do is assign a “hotkey” such as F10 or Print Screen to activate the software, and then use the cursor to draw a box around the area of the screen that you want to capture. You can also capture the entire screen if you desire.
The captured images are automatically saved and organized in a folder you specify. It’s that simple!
I can see how this would be very useful when building a website or creating a tutorial or any number of other creative projects. Here’s an example of an image I gleaned by using SnapIt:
To view a visual tutorial about the features of SnagIt and to order, please follow this link.
http://www.digeus.com/products/snapit/snapit_screen_capture_3_5.html
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“Defensive Tactics” proved to me that an “LDS Thriller” can be done right. It combined elements of a redemptive story in the character of Jimmy, and provided a suspenseful chase as FBI agents try to close in on the corrupt Judge Craven.I found the characters both well-drawn and likeable. Especially enjoyable were the antics and witty banter of Jimmy, who can’t seem to hold down a steady job or take life seriously. He filled in the details of the characters in quite imaginative ways. (For example, Jimmy gets fired from a fast food job because he was sneaking meatballs and keeping them in his pockets. The image made me chuckle)The well-executed characterization makes it so that you really care about the characters’ plight as they all get entangled in a web of a corrupt judge and his cronies. I found the plot interesting without becoming confusing. Best of all, it feels like a well-balanced story with a variety of elements of action, romance, suspense, and redemption.Paul Stephens has it all–a wonderful job at the FBI, a new girlfriend, and a great apartment. Even when Jimmy, a friend from his past, unexpectedly ends up on his couch, Paul has no worries. But when arresting a corrupt judge puts his girlfriend’s life in danger, Paul and Jimmy will do anything to save her. How far will Paul go to protect the ones he love? Filled with suspense and action, Defensive Tactics shows just how much the bonds of friendship can endure.Pick up a copy just in time for the Holidays. You’ll be glad you did.
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National Novel Writing Month has been a blast for me. I’ve been knocking out about 1,700 words every day and it’s a great feeling. My book “Dreamspire” is coming along nicely and I’ll be sure to share an excerpt soon.
If you have not yet begun, it is not too late! Get typing-today. Even if you can’t quite hit the 50,000 mark, you’ve done something wonderful: you’ve got your start. I find that that is often the hardest part about writing a book. Once you’ve gotten the momentum going, it is much easier to keep going.
I would like to continue with my Roy Elementary writing series and talk about hooking your reader.
It used to be that novelists were not expected to get right to the point. They spent pages upon pages of giving background, describing the setting, etc, etc, ad nauseum. Just pick up “Moby Dick” or “Les Miserables” or “War and Peace” if you want an example of what I’m talking about.
Those days are gone. We live in an age of movies, TV shows and internet, where people want quick results. They want to be drawn into the story right away, given a reason to care and then drawn along on exciting adventure. If you don’t write like this, your potential reader will probably put your book down and go back to updating his Facebook status for the 10th time that day.
The principles of hooking your reader are the same as hooking a fish: you need good bait. The following are some things that you might consider using as bait for your readers:•Mysteries/Good questions•Action•High stakes/a lot to lose•Strange characters/places•Strong words•Interesting, vivid, quick descriptions•SuspenseOn the other hand, you don’t usually catch fish with poor bait. For example:•Cliché’s, things that people have heard before (It was a dark and stormy night)•Things that move slowly-long descriptions, a long back story•No action, “Is something going to happen already?”Consider the difference of the two beginnings to a story:“Once upon a time, it was a dark and stormy night. Fred sat in his chair and thought of a summer, long, long ago, on a beach far, far away.”When Billy got home, a black box lay on his bed. Atop the box, in vivid red writing lay a note: “Do not open until midnight on pain of death.”The first, is clichéd and launches us directly into a flashback. The second creates an immediate sense of urgency and mystery.That’s all for this post. Visit http://www.nanowrimo.org if you haven’t already and get your story started with the perfect hook! -
I usually keep this blog to writing-related topics, but I just have to announce that my wife delivered our second child last night, a wonderful little baby boy who we have named Bryson Max Young. He was 5 lb 14 oz and was 18.5 in long. He’s having a few complications, but is expected to make a full recovery.
My wife is doing well, and we’re both just thrilled to have another little guy in the house. I would also like to thank all the people who have wished us well and helped us out. It’s been an overwhelmingly loving response.



