• A Past With Two Faces
    • A Wonderful Week for a Quest
    • About Me
    • An Advent Carols Countdown
    • Are you ready for a quest?
    • Book 1: A Quest You Can Laugh At…(Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Book 2: Both an Ox and a Moron…(Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Book 3: A Quest That Doesn’t Go…Well (Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Book 4: A Pirate’s Life for Me…(Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Book 5: A Phoenix Saga (Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Book 6: The Battle Begins…(Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Book 7: All Good Things… (Family-Friendly Fantasy Series)
    • Contact and Social Media
    • Fiction Quests
    • First Edition Bard Cards
    • First Thing’s First
    • Instructional Design portfolio
    • Love’s Redeeming Work is Done
    • Music and Poetry
    • My Podcasts and Channels
    • News
    • Non-Fiction Quests
    • O Say, Can You Sing? (Songs)
    • Oh Say, Can You Sing? (Heroes)
    • Picture Books
    • Professional Services
    • Sacred Days, Sacred Songs
    • Tearjerkers for Tots Book
    • The Adventures of Mr. E
    • The Canticle Chronicles
    • The Chess Quest Series
    • The Last Archangel Series
    • The Lost Barge
    • The Penultimate Dawn Series
    • Wally the Web Wizard eBook
    • Wally, the Web Wizard
    • World Language Editions

Books by Michael D. Young

  • My Best Writing Year Ever: How I Did It

    December 25th, 2012

     600,000 words in 365 days. In December 2011, that was my goal. I honestly didn’t know if I could do it. That was like writing words equal to NaNoWriMo (50,000) every month for an entire year. As of Dec 20th, 2012, I hit 609,548 words for the year.

    I had to set some ground rules for myself. I said that only writing that I intended to try to publish in some form would count, and the prewriting that I did for any novels or short stories. Anything I did for work, emails, etc would not count. 
    I also thought that I needed to keep very good track so I could have exact word counts. My first step was to create an excel spreadsheet with 12 tabs, and label them for the months. I took a cell and set it up to display the total of the all numbers in the first column. Then, any time I wrote something, I put the word total in the next open cell in the first column. This kept an automatic running total with little hassle. I then set up a cell in each sheet that added up all of the total cells, so I could have a running total of everything I had done for the year. 
    This sheet helped keep me motivated. I could always tell how much progress I had made and how much I had yet to do. 
    I then evaluated my writing style. I know that I work best when I have a few projects going at a time, and so I mapped out the things I wanted to work on next and decided to work on each of these projects every day. I prioritized the projects to work on the ones I wanted to get done first early in the year. 
    Then, there really wasn’t a big trick to it. I committed to writing every day and anytime I could. I tried to bring my laptop with me for times when I had a few minutes. If I didn’t have my laptop, I wrote using my iPod. If I didn’t have that, I kept a notebook handy to write, or prepare myself for writing so that I could move more quickly when I got to it.  
    The biggest thing is to know when your best productive times of the day are and really use them for all they are worth. During these times, minimize distractions. Turn off Facebook, check your email once before you got to the writing zone, or whatever you need to do. Pinterest will still be there when you get back. There are even programs such as Cold Turkey, which will allow you to block these sites for a certain time limit while you write. Pretty useful. 
    I experienced some major setbacks. I had some really busy weeks, such as the week before “The Secret Garden ” opened, in which I was an actor. Two LDS General Conferences and countless other events for the Mormon Tabernacle Choir. Looming deadlines for work, a complete hard drive meltdown, severe sickness and many other things inhibited my ability to write. There were times when I fell way behind and had to rush forward by writing 10,000 words on the last two days of the month. 
    I’m here to tell you that persistence pays. Just like in running a marathon, it does not do you any good to spend all of your energy in one burst and then stop running. You must keep a steady pace, with occasional bursts of speed to catch up in order to do your best. I believe that goals help writers push themselves to accomplish more than they normally would. Here’s a glimpse into what I wrote this year: 
    Novels
    The Canticle Kingdom Book III
    The Last Archangels, Books II and III
    Wandaful 
    Elected (Partial) 
    The Death Seer (Partial) 
    Non-Fiction
    The Ward Choir Survival Guide 
    The Ultimate Morning Study Companion (German/English) 
    Voices in My Blood (Partial, co-authored)
    Personal History 2012 
    Short Stories 
    Many, including ones for two anthologies “Sing We Now of Christmas” and “Carol of the Tales”. 
    Stage
    When Death Comes (Musical) 
    Christmas Spirits the Musical (Partial) 
    Serial Stories
    Canticle of Dawn
    Canticle of Twilight
    Age of Archangels Seasons I and II
    Christmas Spirits 
    Articles
    Dozens of articles for GospelIdeals.org 
    This next year is going to be taken up in revision and getting these and works from past years polished up and better ready to submit. If anyone else is up to the challenge, I highly recommend it. I accomplished so much this year and it is great now to look back and see that it all worked out. I am committed and serious about writing and will continue to put in the long hours that it takes to realize my potential. 
    What are your writing goals for the coming year? 
    A Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to all! 
  • Checkin’ It Twice

    December 10th, 2012
    Checkin' It Twice

    In addition to my own anthology, Sing We Now of Christmas, I have the honor of being in this wonderful Christmas anthology put out by LDS Publisher. It doesn’t hurt that they named the anthology after my story “Checkin’ It Twice”.

    These stories really are the creme of the crop and will make an excellent addition to your Christmas. The variety also strikes me as huge plus, with some more lighthearted and others more serious, but all of them uplifting. It is literally an effort years in the making and quality shows.

    If you order before December 15th from Amazon, you’re eligible for all sorts of Christmas goodies. Simply email your proof of purchase to: citbonus@rosehavenpublishing.net. For details, click here: http://bit.ly/UgfMTi

    Here are some links where you can order this festive anthology:

    • Amazon (print & kindle): bitly.com/ViEc22
    • 5 format ebook bundle: http://www.ldsebookstore.com/checkin-it-twice
    To learn more about the individual stories and the authors involved, visit the Checkin’ It Twice site: http://www.checkinittwice.blogspot.com/

     Merry Christmas to all!

  • Book Lovers Holiday Giveaway Hop

    December 3rd, 2012

    I’m fresh off a win from NaNoWriMo with 50,000 words towards a single novel and 30,000 other words written for a personal best of 80,000 words written in one month. Congrats to all those who finished NaNoWriMo!

    Another great giveaway hop where you can win some great things just in time for the holidays. Enter below on the Rafflecopter widget, and then visit the many other blogs participating. Thanks, and happy holidays!

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  • Advent Event Winners!

    November 19th, 2012
    Thank you to all who entered the Advent Event! Here are the winners:

    Angie Lofthouse: Paperback of Sing We Now of Christmas
    Andrea Pearson: Paperback copy of “Dawn Quealy”
    Konstanz Silverbow: A Hawaiian Goodie Basket
    Lynn Cisneros lA homemade winter hat
    Randi Spurling Paperback copy of “Life is Like a Unicycle”
    Mercedes Murdock Yardley Paperback copy of “The Canticle Kingdom”
    Candice Maudsley Paperback copy of “Toys Remembered”
    Bobbie Gross Inexpensive gift ideas from Janet Olsen
    Wendy Hauer Paperback copy of “The Hidden Sun”
    Shauna Wheelwright A book by Brian Ricks
    Tara Pennington PDF copy of “Sing We Now of Christmas”
    Roberta Purvis Hulse PDF copy of “Sing We Now of Christmas”
    If you are a winner, please send me your shipping address to thecanticlekingdom@gmail.com to claim your prize. If you won one of the PDFs, don’t worry about sending me your address. 
    Please continue to spread the word about the anthology. It is still available for purchase here: http://amzn.com/1479266248

  • Advent Event Day 12

    November 18th, 2012

     Welcome to day 12 of the Advent Event! Please share this event with your friends. The more anthologies we can sell, the more money we can raise for the National Down Syndrome Society.

    Purchase the book here: http://amzn.com/1479266248

    Or visit this site for more information: http://adventanthology.wordpress.com

    Here’s a look at the last stories:

    “Twas the Flight Before Christmas” by Michael Young

    ‘Twas the flight before Christmas, and all through the plane, holiday travelers were going insane…
    A coach airplane seat was never meant to house a grown man and a squirming toddler. It’s a stretch for a first-class seat. This, however, was the just the situation I found myself in on Christmas Eve, 2009. Having recently been laid off, I had opted for the cheapest flight I could find, which happened to be on the day before Christmas. My wife couldn’t get off work, and so this Christmas, it was just me and little guy.
    Our plane was stuffed fuller than Santa’s bag of toys, and none of the passengers looked like it was the most wonderful time of the year. My son was too young to understand that he wasn’t supposed to pout or cry around Christmastime. Doubtless, some of the passengers wondered what I had done to deserve a fate worse than coal. Though his grandfather is a pilot, my son is not a natural in the air. His ears never pop, he always wants to be free to move about the cabin, and doesn’t understand when I have to put away his DVD player for takeoff and landing.
    Despite my son’s aversion to flying, we made it through the first leg of our flight and reached our layover in Wisconsin. As soon as the doors opened, I grabbed everything and dashed off the plane, knowing that my window for catching our flight was slim. It turns out, I could have crawled to the gate backwards and still arrived in time. It might have put me on the TSA’s Naughty List, but then again, it might have also gotten me on YouTube.

    “Silent Night” by Shirley Bahlmann

     “Silent night, holy night,” Willis sang in a vibrant tenor voice that filled the cozy kitchen as his butter knife kept time with the music. “All is calm, all is bright.”
    “Willis!” His mother’s panicked voice stopped his song.
    “Yes?” he called, his knife hovering over the bread as he tried to decide if he should panic too.
    “Come here, hurry!” Her words trembled in the air. Willis dropped the bread and the knife, which landed on the creamy yellow butter with a slurpy thud. He hurried to the front room and found his mother with a stack of mail in one hand and a single envelope in the other.
    “What is it?” Willis asked, taking the letter from Mother’s shaking hand. “You’d better sit down.” He steered her to a chair and pressed down gently on her shoulders. She collapsed onto the cushion. “It’s the draft board,” she said, her teary eyes raised to his.
    Willis ripped open the envelope and pulled out a sheet of paper. Printed across the top in bold letters were the words, “ORDER TO REPORT FOR INDUCTION.”
    “My son is going to war,” Mother moaned.
    Willis dropped to his knee so he could encircle her shoulder with his arm. “Lots of men are going.”
    “But you are so talented. You’re a wonderful singer, the best I’ve ever heard—Margery  Milton even says so, and she’s not related.” Her face crumpled. “Oh, Willis, your barbershop quartet will be a trio.”
    “It will turn out all right,” Willis soothed, patting her back. “I can re-join the quartet when I return.”
    “Some soldiers never return,” she sobbed. “I prayed this day wouldn’t come. I prayed so hard, but it didn’t do any good, and it’s almost Christmas!”
    Willis couldn’t think of anything to say to comfort her. He hated leaving his widowed mother, but there was a war that needed to be fought. All he could do was kneel on the carpet and pat her back until her tears were spent.

    “I Heard the Bells on Christmas Day” by J. Lloyd Morgan
    My trash can was nearly overflowing, and crumbs from several days’ worth of lunches were scattered on the floor. It seemed that once again, the cleaning crew hadn’t done their job. A blinking light on my phone indicated that the voice message box was full, even though I had cleared it out the previous night. While my computer was booting up, I looked at my planner from the day before. I always wrote down the things I needed to accomplish during the day, and then I’d cross them off as I’d go. Yesterday’s list started with ten items, and over the course of the day, it had grown to twice that size. I sighed when I realized I had only crossed off three.
    After putting away my homemade lunch in my desk drawer—I didn’t dare put it in the break room fridge because it would disappear before I’d get a chance to eat it—I pulled up my email. I had one hundred and thirty-two new messages. About every third message was marked “urgent”.
    I plowed through my work, like I did every day, when at around 4:45 pm I got an interoffice buzz on my phone.
    “Jenkins here,” I answered.
    “You’re required in conference room F,” said my boss’s secretary.  She hung up before I could ask why. I still had several hours’ worth of work to complete before I would be even marginally caught up.
    I walked by the bigger, empty conference rooms as I made my way to F. Unlike the other rooms, F didn’t have any windows. My guess was that my boss preferred it that way so there were no distractions.
    “You wanted to see me?” I asked.
    “Sit down,” she said without looking up from the papers in front of her.
    Though she wasn’t that many years older than me, she looked twice my age. Her hair was gray with streaks of black, and she wore narrow glasses that rested on the end of her nose. I imagined that at one time she could have been considered pretty, but years of being in a bad mood, and thus frowning, had created wrinkles that made her look like she was always upset.

    And here a look of one of the prizes:

    A signed paperback copy of “Sing We Now of Christmas”

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  • Advent Event Day 11

    November 17th, 2012

     Welcome to day 11 of the Advent Event! Please share this event with your friends. The more anthologies we can sell, the more money we can raise for the National Down Syndrome Society.

    Purchase the book here: http://amzn.com/1479266248

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    Here’s a look at the next two stories:

    “Jolly Old Saint Nicholas” by Jennifer Ricks

    “Ho! Ho! Ho!” Cameron boomed. His lips formed an “O” to give his voice maximum resonance. It was hard to sound like an old fat guy when you were fat, but not old.
    “I want a big candy cane!” the eight-year-old on his lap whined. “That thing’s puny!”
    “Well, I’m afraid I left my large candy canes at the North pole, little man,” Cameron said, trying to make his chest sound as hollow as possible. What was wrong with kids these days? Had Cameron also been so demanding when he was this age?
    “And what do you want for Christmas?” Cameron leaned down to a little girl, probably about four years old. Ruining the precious moment, his flowing white beard dangled into her face and the girl started screaming as if he had cut off her right arm.
    “We got the photo,” Stacy said loudly over the girl’s noise. “Move it along.”
    Cameron’s palms itched beneath the thick leather mittens he was wearing. In fact, he itched everywhere. What did Santa do to stop the chaffing? This red wool racket was intolerable. There were regulations for guys in character suits at theme parks—what about for Santa Clauses?
    So far, the idea of getting a seasonal job at the mall during the holidays had come right back to bite. Work with children, make some smiles, spread some Christmas cheer, he had thought. What a joke. It was nearly Christmas, the four-week Santa Claus gig nearly over, and Cameron hadn’t yet met a kid who wasn’t whining, kicking, screaming, or, worst of all, biting. Ouch.
    “And what have we here?” Cameron said in the most endearing, grandfatherly way he could muster, letting the vowels rumble in his throat.
    “I want this list of video games,” the boy shoved a full page list into Cameron’s gloved hand, “and a new MP3 player, and a new laptop, and, if you really want to surprise me, a remote-control helicopter.”
    “Slow down there, tiger!” Cameron’s Santa-voice said. “Have you been good this year?” He held up a leather mitten to accentuate the question.
    “Oh, whatever.” The boy shrugged, sliding off Cameron’s lap. “I texted the list to my dad.”
    “Hey, Stace!” Cameron hissed when the boy was gone.
    “What?” Stacy snapped. “Can’t imagine your workshop filling so many video game orders this year, or aren’t the elves up on the latest computer models? I thought you were crazy about RPGs.”

    “Hazel and Margaret” by Susan Corpany
    Hazel responded to the knock on her door. “It’s not locked. Come in.”
    Margaret leaned her cane against the wall and opened the door with her free hand. She deposited the plate of raisin and date-filled cookies—her aunt Sophie’s recipe—on the small table in the entry. “Merry Christmas and joy to the world. I thought I’d bring these by a little early this year.” Her hands now free, she retrieved her cane from its resting place, closing the door tightly against the cold.
    “Sorry, I thought you were the Meals on Wheels people,” Hazel said.
    Margaret smiled cheerily, waving her cane, careful not to lose her balance as she made her way to the small sofa opposite Hazel’s easy chair. “No wheels yet, thank the good Lord. No meal, either. Just dessert.”
    “I guess I’m getting my just desserts,” Hazel said wearily, looking up. Margaret noticed then that her lifelong friend had been crying. She might have detected the note of sadness in her friend’s voice, but truth be told Hazel had never been overly cheerful. They had been friends since they had moved next door to each other as newlyweds, sharing the experiences of life—dented fenders, dreams that came true and those that didn’t, overdue babies and overdue bills. In fact, they had become related in a way when Hazel’s son Daniel had married Margaret’s daughter, Ramona, the girl next door. 
    They had doted over their common grandchildren who got to see two grandmas in one visit. Most recently, they had shared the common bond of widowhood. Hazel had laid her beloved Matthew to rest several years prior, and it had been two years since Margaret had bid her Charles goodbye. Both clung fiercely to their independence and to the small homes they had lived in for the better part of their lives.

    And here a look of one of the prizes:

    A PDF copy of “Sing We Now of Christmas”

      a Rafflecopter giveaway

  • Advent Event Day 10

    November 16th, 2012

     Welcome to day 10 of the Advent Event! Please share this event with your friends. The more anthologies we can sell, the more money we can raise for the National Down Syndrome Society.

    Purchase the book here: http://amzn.com/1479266248

    Or visit this site for more information: http://adventanthology.wordpress.com

    Here’s a look at the next two stories:

    “Troll, the Ancient Yuletide Carol” by Michael D. Young

    On the first of November at the stroke of midnight, Ms. Christie Carole flung open to the doors to the Carol Conservatory. “O, come all ye faithful!” she called in a cherry voice. “Christmas is coming, the goose is getting fat!”
    From within, a chorus of carols sprang to life with the tinkling of jingle bells and refrains of “Fa, la, la, la, la…”
    “Isn’t it supposed to be ‘I heard the bells on Christmas day’” asked the carol bearing the same name. “They haven’t even stuffed the turkeys yet.”
    “You better not pout,” Ms. Carole said with a stern look. “The radio will need you all before long, and you must be warmed up and ready to go.”
    When Ms. Carole had awoken the last of the sleepy carols, Silent Night and Away in a Manger, she glanced in the cupboard and noticed a carol she had never seen before in the far back corner. “Bring a torch, Jennette Isabella.”
    The carol she had named stepped into the room, lighting every corner of it. There in the cupboard sat an old, wrinkled carol, blinking and rubbing his eyes.
    Ms. Carole turned to the carol next to her and asked, “Yonder carol, who is he? Where and what his dwelling?”
    When the carol she had asked shrugged, the old carol answered for himself. “My name is Troll—Troll, the Ancient Yuletide Carol.”

    “The Dayspring” by Daron D. Fraley
    Charles Gaston used an ink dropper to load the nib reservoir, then tested a few strokes on a scrap of paper grocery bag. The black ink flowed well. To be sure the lines were crisp, he placed the pen in a holder and moved his dynamo-powered flashlight closer so he could see the edges of his work. Satisfied, he rested his wrinkled forearm on the silver edge of the upside-down Victorian server so his hand would not tremble.
    What else was he to use? He had no blank paper. The only remaining sheets had already been printed on both sides—back when the electricity was on and they could use the computer to log the incredible changes which had occurred. And a paper bag didn’t seem right. Too cheap.
    No, this would have to do. Besides, using the leather base of the tray as his canvas would look nice—it would be trimmed in silver like a fancy picture frame. He set the pen nib at the top of the leather and penned the first lines from memory:
    O come, o come, Emmanuel
    And ransom captive Israel,
    That mourns in lonely exile here
    Until the Son of God appear.
    Rejoice! Rejoice! Emmanuel
    Shall come to you, O Israel!
    He blew on the fresh ink softly so it wouldn’t splatter. As he read the words in the dim light, the tune came to his mind, but he didn’t hum it—he didn’t want to wake his Lizzie. He remembered when he had played it for a visiting dignitary—he couldn’t think of the name—when the Paroisse was cold and damp on a mid-December evening. The visitor had smiled politely, but had not seemed impressed. Charles had muttered a snide comment under his breath. The man heard him. Apologies were later given, but Charles hadn’t really been sincere.

    And here a look of one of the prizes:

    A pdf copy of “Sing We Now of Christmas”.

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  • Advent Event Day 9

    November 15th, 2012

     Welcome to day 9 of the Advent Event! Please share this event with your friends. The more anthologies we can sell, the more money we can raise for the National Down Syndrome Society.

    Purchase the book here: http://amzn.com/1479266248

    Or visit this site for more information: http://adventanthology.wordpress.com

    Here’s a look at the next two stories:

    “Angels We Have Heard on High” by Marta O. Smith

    Ann carefully unwrapped the tissue paper cushioning a blown glass angel.  She had been sorting through her mother’s things for a few days now, but this was the first thing that brought tears to her eyes.  The experts said there were several stages of grief:  disbelief, anger, bargaining, depression, and acceptance.  She had been going through the grieving process for her mother for several years now, since Alzheimer’s had effectively taken her away.  To Ann, all that had died last week was the shell of a body where her mother used to live.  The personality, the love, everything that had made her mother who she was, had been gone for a long time.  A sort of numbness had carried her through the funeral, and up until now.
                It had been worse when her father died 10 years ago.  His death had been sudden and violent, the result of a drunk driver on an icy winter road.  Ann and her mother had been able to support each other through their grief.  Miraculously, the other driver had been fully insured and, also miraculously, one of her father’s childhood friends, a lawyer, had contacted them and offered to take their case, pro bono.  Between the large settlement he had negotiated and her father’s life insurance, Ann had been able to quit her job and move back home to take care of her mother, who had already been showing early signs of dementia.
                After her mother’s funeral, Ann had begun sorting and cleaning and giving things away, mostly to keep herself occupied.  Three green plastic storage bins full of Christmas decorations had been down in the basement, and on a whim she had lugged one up to the living room to look through it.  She had pulled out a few of the ornaments, and while looking at them felt a flood of happy emotions from her childhood.  Her mother, Miranda, and her father, Joe, had loved the holiday season.  Christmas had always been a magical time in their home, until the last few years.  But it was her mother’s collection of angel ornaments that opened the floodgate of emotions.  There were glass angels and ceramic angels, angels with wings made of hand-crocheted lace, some Styrofoam and felt creations Ann had crafted in grade school, and even several beautiful angels made of olive wood from her parents’ trip to Israel.

    “White Christmas” by Madonna D. Christensen

    Wrapped in a drab woolen quilt and standing on the straw-filled mattress he shared with his brother, five-year-old Israel scraped frost from the window and peered out. That snow had fallen in the night did not surprise him. Winter in western Siberia lasted through most of the pages of the calendar Papa had made. There might be snowfall for days on end, or drifting snow, icy snow, howling cyclones of snow, snow by moonlight, snow by daylight, snow on rooftops, or snow glistening on scrawny tree limbs when the weak sun found it. The whitened tundra stretched as far as Israel’s eyes could see. This morning, a path of trampled snow offered solid footing to a woman shrouded in a knit babushka and balancing a marketing basket on her hip. Israel squinted at something moving in the distance. Was it a horse-drawn sleigh, its merry bells cracking the frigid silence? More likely it was his imagination; for who in this village owned a sleigh—or even a horse?
    The three room house Israel shared with seven siblings and Papa and Mama was a crude wooden structure. Burlap sacks covered the dirt floor, which wouldn’t feel warm again until long after the ground thawed. To escape the confinement of close quarters and endless, dark days, Papa regularly escorted the family to synagogue. As cantor, he hoped his prayers and readings temporarily eased the isolation and poverty all the villagers endured.

    On a spring morning in 1893, Israel awoke to thundering hooves, to glass breaking, and fiery torches cast through shattered windows. Years later, his only recollection of what Papa called a pogrom was of lying on a blanket by the side of the muddy road, watching his burning home dwindle to an ashen skeleton. After the riotous Cossacks departed, the family had skulked away, moving quickly from town to town. Eventually, they emigrated to New York City.

    It is the release day for another Christmas anthology of which my story is the headliner! If you purchase it today, you get all sorts of extra free prizes. The details are here: http://bit.ly/REQ2zu

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  • Advent Event Day 8

    November 14th, 2012

     Welcome to day 8 of the Advent Event! Please share this event with your friends. The more anthologies we can sell, the more money we can raise for the National Down Syndrome Society.

    Purchase the book here: http://amzn.com/1479266248

    Or visit this site for more information: http://adventanthology.wordpress.com

    Here’s a look at the next two stories:

    “The Good Page” Part III by Ryan Larsen

    Podevin ran, unaware of the tears that flowed down his cheeks. The dark, abnormally warm September air rushed past him as he went, and he had to swerve out of his way to avoid buildings and other obstructions. The bell for matins had tolled only moments past. He prayed to God that he would not be too late. There had been murder enough, as of late—all known supporters of Duke Vaclav.
    When Agnes had come to him minutes earlier, had told him of the plot she had overheard, he had tried not to believe it. If he had not been there at the death of Ludmila, he probably would not have believed it. As it was, he now ran to save the life of his duke. His innocence had been robbed from him that horrid night so long ago.
    The dark streets of Stara Boleslav were unfamiliar to the page, and he only vaguely knew where its solitary church was. At one point, he was forced to pound on a random door, asking directions from the sleepy and startled occupant who opened it.
    Light had begun to creep up the horizon before he saw the spire. He heard shouting.
    Podevin rounded the corner of a large building next to the church. What he saw and heard chilled his blood. A hundred feet from the church steps, Duke Vaclav—a sword wound on his head—wrestled with his brother, trying desperately to take away the younger man’s blade. Two men, one large and the other small, stood nearby, both trying to pierce the duke with their own steel.
    “Csta! Hnevsa! No!” Podevin yelled this as he closed in, not caring that he had no blade of his own.

    “The Good Page” Part IV by Ryan Larsen

    “I went to the cave of the Wanderer,” Podevin said, his ancient limbs creaking as Strachkvas sat on the chair, leaning forward intently to hear what the prisoner’s soft voice said. “He told me I could stay there for as long as I wanted, so I did, even long after he left. I think he was there for only a year after I began living with him. He offered to let me go with him when he left, but I didn’t have any desire to travel. I told a few people—merchants, mostly—about Vaclav’s death, and I think most of them believed me. I never saw Agnes again.”
    With these words out of his mouth, Podevin slumped down, looking more dejected than ever.
    “After a few years, I gave up all hopes of ever seeing anyone I knew again. Mostly I hunted for food. I was almost arrested the last time I came into Prague, and that was more than twenty years ago.”
    “Why did you allow yourself to be caught?” Strachkvas asked, finding that his throat was dry. These were the first words he had said throughout the prisoner’s story.
    A bitter laugh came from the man. “I’m getting old. Besides, it has been a long time since I confessed my sins. Tell me, Father. Am I absolved?”
    The priest thought for a long time, his mind going over what this man had said. He found no guile in him, and although he knew that the man would be killed regardless of what Strachkvas did, he had the strong impression that the man truly was innocent. Strange, as he had shed the blood of a man.
    “Yes, my son. I forgive you. And I believe God does, too.”

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  • Advent Event Day 7

    November 13th, 2012

     Welcome to day 2 of the Advent Event! Please share this event with your friends. The more anthologies we can sell, the more money we can raise for the National Down Syndrome Society.

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    Here’s a look at the next two stories:

    “The Good Page”, Part I by Ryan Larsen

    “You are sure this is the man?” Strachkvas asked, wiping his brow with an already damp cloth and squinting at the prisoner. It was far cooler in the Prague castle dungeon than it had been above ground, but that was the only blessing for the condemned.
    “Yes, Father,” the guard captain said, nodding. “He freely admits his identity.”
    “I will have some words with him. Alone.” The priest stuffed the cloth into a pocket sewn inside his robe, and for a long moment the captain stared at Strachkvas, shifting his gaze only when the prisoner moved. The stench was nearly unbearable, and Strachkvas suspected this was part of the reason the man did not argue when he handed the priest his torch and climbed the ladder, pulling it up behind him.
    The prisoner, whose long, gray beard was as unkempt as his tattered clothing, regarded Strachkvas with a wary eye. Most of the smell came from the corner of the dungeon, but a good deal of it came from the man being held here.
    “Have you come to absolve me of my sins?” the prisoner asked. The laugh that followed was bitter.
    Strachkvas responded to the man’s question with one of his own. “You are Podevin, son of Tira?”
    “I am.”
    Wishing he had thought to bring a stool, the priest shifted his weight. Something about the man’s eyes unnerved him.

    “The Good Page”, Part II by Ryan Larsen

    “Forgive me, Father, for I have sinned,” Podevin said softly, and he thought a sigh escaped the mouth of Father Marcus, the priest beyond the veil.
    “What is this, thy sin, my son?”
    Podevin searched his memory for everything he had done over the previous seven days and he listed them, from the number of times he had lied to the time he had kissed Agnes, the chamber maid he was courting. It had not been a very decent kiss. For each sin, the priest proscribed a certain number of Hail Marys and Our Fathers. The list drew to an end in about five minutes, and Podevin’s tongue stuck to the top of his mouth in his attempt to continue speaking.
    “Son,” Father Marcus said after a long stretch of silence—Podevin was certain he heard a sigh this time. “Have you anything else you would like to confess to me?”
    “There is one thing more,” Podevin said, breathless. “But it is too heinous to speak of, Father.”
    Coughing, Father Marcus leaned close to the veil and said, “My son, I cannot forgive that which I do not know. I have told you this time and time again, my dear Podevin—” the young man started at hearing his name “—and you must know by now that I will tell no one of your sin. Please, tell me so you may be forgiven. As I have told the duke so many times, there is piety and then there is overzealousness. Do not fret, my child. Please, tell me.”
    Podevin could not tell him. After fifteen years, he still could not speak of his involvement in Ludmila’s death and the death of her guards. Fifteen years as the page of her grandson and he had told no one, not even Duke Vaclav himself. Podevin thought yet again of how much his cowardice shamed him.
    “I cannot, Father,” Podevin said, shaking. “I cannot.”

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